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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Priyanshi Sinha ( priyanshisinha AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in )  
at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Elliptic-flow-strange-and-multi-strange-hadrons-isobar-collisions-RHIC-0

Comment:
Hi Priyanshi,

Nice poster. I sign off with few suggestions
- Abstract line 3: nuclear structure and deformation between these nuclei ->  
nuclear structure between these nuclei and deformation
- Abstract line 4: these initial state -> the initial state
- Motivation: deformation using -> deformation via
- Methodology: there is an extra "Lambda"
- Summary: larger size of incoming -> the size of colliding

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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