STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[psinha <psinha AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Zhenyu,

Thank you for the nice suggestions and the sign off. I have tried 
implementing them in the following updated poster. Kindly let me know if 
you have any more comments.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Elliptic-flow-strange-and-multi-strange-hadrons-isobar-collisions-RHIC-0

Sincerely,
Priyanshi

On 2023-06-08 14:25, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Priyanshi Sinha ( 
> priyanshisinha AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in )
> at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Elliptic-flow-strange-and-multi-strange-hadrons-isobar-collisions-RHIC-0
>
> Comment:
> Hi Priyanshi,
>
> Nice poster. I sign off with few suggestions
> - Abstract line 3: nuclear structure and deformation between these 
> nuclei ->
> nuclear structure between these nuclei and deformation
> - Abstract line 4: these initial state -> the initial state
> - Motivation: deformation using -> deformation via
> - Methodology: there is an extra "Lambda"
> - Summary: larger size of incoming -> the size of colliding
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
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