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Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Shengli Huang ( shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Systematic-study-flow-harmonics-di-hadron-correlations-mid-rapidity-pAu-dAu-and-2

Comment:
Hi Shengli,

Nice slides. I have few suggestions
- On a few slides the text overlap with footnote, footnote is not always "IS" 
 
but other conference, please try to fix.
- slide1: middle-rapidity -> mid-rapidity
- slide5: first bullet, do you mean multiplicity distribution is asymmetric  
which is very different from pp?; third bullet, "3He"; to be closer to -> to  
be better estimated by
- slide6: the figures look fuzzy; title, @HIJING -> in HIJING
- slide7: figure on the right does not have correct aspect ratio; v3 > v2 is  
not related to multiplicity
- slide8: TPC 0.2 -> TPC with 0.2; following non-flow subtraction -> another  
bullet "multiple non-flow subtraction methods applied"
- slide9-10: figures fuzzy
- slide11-12: please try to keep the figure same size
- slide22: Projection from -> Uncertainty projection for
- slide24: remove "(triangular flow)"
- slide25-27: swap first and second bullets; HeAu -> 3HeAu
- slide28: figure on the right does not have correct aspect ratio
- slide29: across different non-flow -> with different non-flow; system  
independent -> system-independent

Please try to delete the duplicated drupal entry at  
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63881

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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