STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Shengli,

Nice presentation. I sign off with one minor comment:
sl#6: please correct the typo in the title

With regards,
Subhash



On 2023-06-11 01:47 AM, Shengli Huang via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Zhenyu,
>     Thanks for it.
>     I have implemented your comments. Meanwhile, I have also adjusted
> the contents to let them fit in a 15 minutes talk.
> The updated version can be found:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Systematic-study-flow-harmonics-di-hadron-correlations-mid-rapidity-pAu-dAu-and-2
>
> Thanks!
> Shengli
>
> On Thu, Jun 8, 2023 at 11:09 PM webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
> > originally
> > submitted by Shengli Huang ( shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/2023/Systematic-study-flow-harmonics-di-hadron-correlations-mid-rapidity-pAu-dAu-and-2
> > Comment:
> > Hi Shengli,
> >
> > Nice slides. I have few suggestions
> > - On a few slides the text overlap with footnote, footnote is not
> > always "IS"
> > but other conference, please try to fix.
> > - slide1: middle-rapidity -> mid-rapidity
> > - slide5: first bullet, do you mean multiplicity distribution is
> > asymmetric
> > which is very different from pp?; third bullet, "3He"; to be closer
> > to -> to
> > be better estimated by
> > - slide6: the figures look fuzzy; title, @HIJING -> in HIJING
> > - slide7: figure on the right does not have correct aspect ratio; v3
> > > v2 is
> > not related to multiplicity
> > - slide8: TPC 0.2 -> TPC with 0.2; following non-flow subtraction ->
> > another
> > bullet "multiple non-flow subtraction methods applied"
> > - slide9-10: figures fuzzy
> > - slide11-12: please try to keep the figure same size
> > - slide22: Projection from -> Uncertainty projection for
> > - slide24: remove "(triangular flow)"
> > - slide25-27: swap first and second bullets; HeAu -> 3HeAu
> > - slide28: figure on the right does not have correct aspect ratio
> > - slide29: across different non-flow -> with different non-flow;
> > system
> > independent -> system-independent
> >
> > Please try to delete the duplicated drupal entry at
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63881
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Zhenyu
> >
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