STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Yufu,

Nice slides. I sign off with a few additional comments:

s#1: I believe it is a star talk. Then please add on behalf of STAR 
collaboration, STAR and DOE support logo etc in the first page.
s#7: There are many technical STAR jargons, (e.g. nhits). You can 
consider removing them for talks outside STAR.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-07-10 03:53 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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>
> Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Yufu Lin ( yufulin AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Chirality-Workshop-2023/Search-Chiral-Magnetic-Effect-Forced-Match-Multiplicity-and--0
>
> Comment:
> Nice slides! A few minor comments for you to include in the next 
> version.
>
> General: Slide numbers are missing.
>
> slide#3:
> "differences between isobars system two systems can observed" -->
> "differences between isobars system two systems can be observed in 
> models"
>
> Slide#4:
> "No pre-defined signature" --> "No pre-defined signature (Ratio >1)"
>
> Slide#5:
> "match Ru+Ru" --> "match the Ru+Ru distribution"
>
> slide#8:
> Fix the text going outside of the slides
>
> slide#12:
> Use a darker shade of cyan to write "STAR Preliminary Forced Match"
> On the x-axis "\Delta \gamma_112 /v_2" --> "(\Delta \gamma_112 /v_2) 
> EP, TPC"
>
> Slide#13:
> "The ratio of \Delta \delta" is larger" --> "The ratio of \Delta 
> \delta" is
> larger even after forced match"
>
> Is this pT plot before or after forced matching? You don't indicate
> "(matched)" on the plot. Is this a typo?
> Do you have pT after forced matching?
> If "The ratio of Δδ" is larger, then what matters is pT after the 
> forced
> matching, not before.
>
> Slide#14:
> If you want to present this slide, please correct the text overlap at 
> the
> bottom of the slide.
>
>
>
>
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