STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Cameron,

Very nice and comprehensive slides. I have a few comments below for your 
consideration:

s#2: "Sign change in dv1/dy is a signal for 1st-order phase 
transition.". It is a strong statement and model dependent, you can 
soften it, e.g Sign of dv1/dy is sensitive to 1st-order phase transition

s#3: "Opportunity to get a complete picture of flow observables across 
the phase transition." --> I would suggest, Opportunity to probe the QCD 
phase diagram through flow observables.
or, you can rephrase accordingly.
You can probably remove "Many energies to be used to"

s#4: I think this slide is not necessary. You can consider removing it.

s#9: You are comparing two different beam energies and you want to say 
the v2, v3 ordering is same, which is fine.
"v3 < 0.1 up to pT ∼ 3 GeV/c" --> I am not sure I understand what do you 
want mean here?

s#14,15: In the title you can mention beam energy, like you are doing 
for all other slides.

s#15: You are focussing on light nuclei. May be you can mention "light 
nuclei" in the title

s#16: 27 GeV (2019) is also part of BES-II

s#18: Replace the figure with the version from arXiv. In this paper the 
v1 splitting also increases with _Delta_S_. You should mention this 
important feature.

ps: For completeness, you could also mention there is companion paper 
2304.03430 observed v1 splitting for light hadrons.


Thanks and regards,
Subhash



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