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Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Aditya Prasad Dash ( adityaprasaddash55 AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Exploringelectromagneticfieldeffectsandconstrainingtransportparame-0

Comment:
Dear Aditya,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- Slide2: remove "correlations sensitive to"
- Slide3: title font is different
- Slide4: you have the equations for vn(v1) without any text, please consider 
 
adding at least few words
- Slide5: should "4.Transported..." be separated from 1-3? Since it is not  
"different forces"
- Slide6: dv1/dy(h^+) -> dv1(h^+)/dy
- Slide11: flow vectors -> event planes
- Slide11: and non-flow -> or non-flow
- Slide14: title is constraining initial-state, but longitudinal  
de-correlations is also a constraint on initial state, please try to organize 
 
better

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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