STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Aditya,

Very nice slides. I have a few additional suggestions for your 
consideration:

General:
You have three different initial state physics related topics, how you 
connect them or transit between the slides is not so apparent.  An 
outline of talk in the beginning might help.
Please unify v_1, p_T, reference styles across slides.

s#6:  2nd bullet, how about: sign change could reveal effects of 
electromagnetic field in QGP
Correct the PR_C typo at the bottom

s#7: ... negative v1 slopes ...
200GeV --> 200 GeV

s#8: 2nd bullet: Suggest dominance of --> Consistence with dominance of
3rd bullet: Comparison to IEBE-VISHNU+EM field ... --> It is extracted 
for 200 GeV, right? Then please clarify.

s#8, 9: Another interesting feature is the zero crossing of Delta_v1 at 
a particular centrality, could be mentioned as a bullet. But you may not 
have time go through that details.

s#14: You can probably spell out GMC

s#15: For the figure, there could be two legends one for data and one 
for models, or you can consider adding a space between them them.

s#18: I would suggest to separate the summary from three different 
sections, and re-arrange them, may be you can write them in three 
different boxes. In this format it is difficult grasp the summary.


Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-08-25 03:50 PM, ADITYA PRASAD DASH via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Conveners,
> We have added the AMPT model comparisons to r2 and r3 and the updated
> presentation can be found at the same link
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Exploringelectromagneticfieldeffectsandconstrainingtransportparame-0
>
> Thanks,
> Aditya
>
> On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 12:47 PM ADITYA PRASAD DASH
> <adityadash55 AT g.ucla.edu> wrote:
>
> > Hi Zhenyu,
> > Thanks for the useful comments. They have been implemented and the
> > updated version of the presentation can be found at the same link
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Exploringelectromagneticfieldeffectsandconstrainingtransportparame-0
> > .
> >
> > Thanks again,
> > Aditya
> >
> > On Mon, Aug 21, 2023 at 12:02 AM webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l
> > <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
> > > originally
> > > submitted by Aditya Prasad Dash ( adityaprasaddash55 AT gmail.com )
> > > at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Exploringelectromagneticfieldeffectsandconstrainingtransportparame-0
> > > Comment:
> > > Dear Aditya,
> > >
> > > Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
> > > - Slide2: remove "correlations sensitive to"
> > > - Slide3: title font is different
> > > - Slide4: you have the equations for vn(v1) without any text,
> > > please consider
> > > adding at least few words
> > > - Slide5: should "4.Transported..." be separated from 1-3? Since
> > > it is not
> > > "different forces"
> > > - Slide6: dv1/dy(h^+) -> dv1(h^+)/dy
> > > - Slide11: flow vectors -> event planes
> > > - Slide11: and non-flow -> or non-flow
> > > - Slide14: title is constraining initial-state, but longitudinal
> > > de-correlations is also a constraint on initial state, please try
> > > to organize
> > > better
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Zhenyu
> > >
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