STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Shengli Huang <shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Zhenyu,

    Thanks for the comments. I have updated the slide based on your comments. The slide 10 template y range have to be large than others so I keep it unchanged.

Thanks!

Shengli 

On Sat, Sep 2, 2023 at 9:59 AM webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by Shengli Huang ( shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurements-azimuthal-anisotropies-OO-and-gAu-collisions-STAR

Comment:
Dear Shengli,

Nice slides. I sign off with a few suggestions:
- Slide6: under studying -> under investigation
- Slide8&9&10: keep the title consistent; keep either "O+O" or "OO"; possible 
to make the plot on slide10 have same y range as slide8&9?
- Slide10: maybe better to move ATLAS reference next to the text "template 
fit", to avoid confusing this is a ATLAS plot
- Slide11: only -> always
- Slide14: is hold -> holds
- Slide17: higher -> larger
- Slide19: anisotropy -> azimuthal anisotropies; study -> studied; remove 
"with 60-80% centrality"; is hold -> holds

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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