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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Zuowen Liu ( liuzw AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Anisotropic-Flow-Identified-Particles-Au-Au-Collisions-3-%E2%80%93-196-GeV

Comment:
Dear Zuowen,

Much better! I sign off with few suggestions:
- Slide4: , give -> and provide
- Slide7: is there a reference for KFParticle? if so please add it; decay  
particles -> decayed particles
- Slide8: would be better to move fitting function and range into the  
figures, next to "slope = ..."; with pT -> at pT
- Slide9: I don't think you need the "Note" here as no fitting shown on this  
slide; Related posters -> See also posters
- Slide10: reproduced -> reproduces
- Slide11: in the magnitude -> in magnitude
- Slide13&14: roles -> role
- Slide16: keep the indent for every line
- Slide17: dataset -> data

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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