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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR

Comment:
Dear Chengdong,

Largely improved! I sign off with few suggestions:
- General: you don't need the ";" at end of bullet points
- Slide9: yellow boxes -> boxes. there are also black boxes :)
- Slide11: are scaled -> scale
- Slide15: collision dependence -> collision energy dependence; clearly  
energy -> clear energy; in plane expansions -> in-plane; "for both" is  
incomplete, you has space to write them out
- Slide16: this is personal opinion, I think when you speak on behalf of STAR 
 
and thank STAR is like one thanks herself, bit strange

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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