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Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han (Xionghong He) for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen

From: 韩成栋 <chdhan AT impcas.ac.cn>
To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han (Xionghong He) for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
Date: Sun, 3 Sep 2023 14:30:19 +0800 (GMT+08:00)

Dear Zhenyu

Many thanks for your kind comments and suggestions.
I have implemented them with your suggestions into my slides.

Please Kindly find the updated report by the link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64787

Thank you for your attention.

Best wishes,

Chengdong Han

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2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
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> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
originally
> submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
>
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR
>
> Comment:
> Dear Chengdong,
>
> Largely improved! I sign off with few suggestions:
> - General: you don't need the ";" at end of bullet points
> - Slide9: yellow boxes -> boxes. there are also black boxes :)
> - Slide11: are scaled -> scale
> - Slide15: collision dependence -> collision energy dependence;
clearly
> energy -> clear energy; in plane expansions -> in-plane; "for
both" is
> incomplete, you has space to write them out
> - Slide16: this is personal opinion, I think when you speak on behalf of
STAR
> and thank STAR is like one thanks herself, bit strange
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
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[Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xionghong He for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen, webmaster, 09/02/2023
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