STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Xiaoyu,

Your updated slides are very good. I sign off with a few minor comments:

s#12: Onwards, if the v_3(psi) paper appears on arXiv or approved by 
STAR, we should mention arXiv :xxxx or contact Cameron for exact wording 
before your talk.

s#14: gradience --> gradient

s#15:  Potential is essential --> may be  Mean-field Potential is 
essential or Nuclear potential is essential

s#18:  you mean, y_CM < 0.5 (?)


Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-08-28 05:21 PM, subhash wrote:
> Dear Xiaoyu,
>
> Your slides are in a very good shape. I have only a few additional
> suggestion for your consideration:
>
> s#8: It might be good to indicate UrQMD settings, eg Cascade mode with
> any EoS etc. Also add a reference of their paper.
>
> s#12: You can add a line or an equation, how odd and even is separated.
>
> s#13: You can add JAM reference or version. Recently, we saw JAM1 vs
> JAM2 show very different trends for v1.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2023-08-27 12:55 PM, Liu, Xiaoyu via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Hello Zhenyu,
> >
> >  Thanks for your comments!
> >
> >  I have incorporated all your comments. I have also made other changes
> > based on the feedbacks from PAs. The latest version can be found at
> > the same drupal page:
> >
> >
> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$
> >
> >  Thanks,
> >  Xiaoyu
> >
> > -------------------------
> >
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> > Subject: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xiaoyu Liu for Quark Matter
> > 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
> >
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
> > originally
> > submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$
> >
> >
> > Comment:
> > Dear Xiaoyu,
> >
> > Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
> > - General: I would suggest not using all capital letters in the
> > titles, at
> > least hard to read for me :)
> > - Slide2: add few words for the key points of the slide
> > - Slide3: coalescence rule -> coalescence
> > - Slide4: momentum points -> momentum direction
> > - Slide7: but exhibits -> and exhibits
> > - Slide8: would it be helpful to explain how odd and even terms are
> > calculated?
> > - Slide9: remove "rule"
> > - Slide12: vertex -> collision vertex
> > - Slide13: the vertical dash lines need legend
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Zhenyu
> >
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