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- From: "Liu, Xiaoyu" <liu.6566 AT buckeyemail.osu.edu>
- To: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>, "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xiaoyu Liu for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
- Date: Sun, 3 Sep 2023 04:30:04 +0000
Hello Subhash,
Thanks for your suggestions, I have implemented all of them and uploaded the new version. I got v1 model results at 27 GeV from Iurri Karpenko's student yesterday and I have included it in my slides, too.
I will add the arXiv number once Cameron's paper is out.
Thanks,
Xiaoyu
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Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xiaoyu Liu for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
Dear Xiaoyu,
Your updated slides are very good. I sign off with a few minor comments:
s#12: Onwards, if the v_3(psi) paper appears on arXiv or approved by
STAR, we should mention arXiv :xxxx or contact Cameron for exact wording
before your talk.
s#14: gradience --> gradient
s#15: Potential is essential --> may be Mean-field Potential is
essential or Nuclear potential is essential
s#18: you mean, y_CM < 0.5 (?)
Thanks and regards,
Subhash
On 2023-08-28 05:21 PM, subhash wrote:
> Dear Xiaoyu,
>
> Your slides are in a very good shape. I have only a few additional
> suggestion for your consideration:
>
> s#8: It might be good to indicate UrQMD settings, eg Cascade mode with
> any EoS etc. Also add a reference of their paper.
>
> s#12: You can add a line or an equation, how odd and even is separated.
>
> s#13: You can add JAM reference or version. Recently, we saw JAM1 vs
> JAM2 show very different trends for v1.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2023-08-27 12:55 PM, Liu, Xiaoyu via Star-fcv-l wrote:
>> Hello Zhenyu,
>>
>> Thanks for your comments!
>>
>> I have incorporated all your comments. I have also made other changes
>> based on the feedbacks from PAs. The latest version can be found at
>> the same drupal page:
>>
>>
>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Xiaoyu
>>
>> -------------------------
>>
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>> Subject: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Xiaoyu Liu for Quark Matter
>> 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
>>
>> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>
>> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
>> originally
>> submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$
>>
>>
>> Comment:
>> Dear Xiaoyu,
>>
>> Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
>> - General: I would suggest not using all capital letters in the
>> titles, at
>> least hard to read for me :)
>> - Slide2: add few words for the key points of the slide
>> - Slide3: coalescence rule -> coalescence
>> - Slide4: momentum points -> momentum direction
>> - Slide7: but exhibits -> and exhibits
>> - Slide8: would it be helpful to explain how odd and even terms are
>> calculated?
>> - Slide9: remove "rule"
>> - Slide12: vertex -> collision vertex
>> - Slide13: the vertical dash lines need legend
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Zhenyu
>>
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