STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Physics-Collision-2023/Recent-highlights-STAR-experiment-RHIC

Comment:
Nice slides. Here are my minor comments, mostly on typos:
Slide-1: "from STAR" --> "from the STAR"
Slide-2: "critical point" --> "the QCD critical point"
Slide-5:  "Provide chance" --> "Provides a chance"
And the end of the sentence consider adding something like "by study  
fluctuation of conserved quantities"
Slide-6: "Sensitive to hydrodynamics and viscosity" --> "Sensitive to  
viscosity"
Slide-16: "nuclear deformity" --> "quadruple deformity"
Slide-17: "improve BES-I results" --> "improve the precision"
Slide-19: "indicate partonic" -->"indicates partonic"



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