STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[vipul <vipul AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Prtiwish,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.
I have implemented them. The updated version is uploaded to the drupal:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/StarHighlights_PIC2023_Vipul_v2.pdf

Thanks,
With Regards,
Vipul

On 2023-10-08 03:25, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Physics-Collision-2023/Recent-highlights-STAR-experiment-RHIC
>
> Comment:
> Nice slides. Here are my minor comments, mostly on typos:
> Slide-1: "from STAR" --> "from the STAR"
> Slide-2: "critical point" --> "the QCD critical point"
> Slide-5:  "Provide chance" --> "Provides a chance"
> And the end of the sentence consider adding something like "by study
> fluctuation of conserved quantities"
> Slide-6: "Sensitive to hydrodynamics and viscosity" --> "Sensitive to
> viscosity"
> Slide-16: "nuclear deformity" --> "quadruple deformity"
> Slide-17: "improve BES-I results" --> "improve the precision"
> Slide-19: "indicate partonic" -->"indicates partonic"
>
>
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