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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by ChunJian Zhang ( czhang.phys AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NN2024/Imaging-collective-structure-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR

Comment:
Nice abstract. I sign off with few suggestions:
- line 7: triaxiality -> triaxiality gamma
- line 10: beta_2U -> beta_2 (?)
- line 11: you can remove 'triaxiality'
- line 12-13: remove 'collisions' around Zr
- line 14: impacts by -> impacts from
- line 15: this pair -> the pair
- line 15: measurement suggests -> measurements suggest
- line 16: remove comma after Zr
- line 18: is discussed -> is also discussed

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