STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chunjian Zhang <czhang.phys AT gmail.com>]

Dear Zhenyu,

Thank you for your insightful comments. With implementing all your nice comments, the updated draft is at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NN2024Abstract_v2.pdf

the diff file is also attached here to easily trace at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NN2024Abstract_v2diff.pdf

Thanks for your suggestions. 

Cheers,

Chunjian 

On Mon, Dec 11, 2023 at 10:15 PM webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by ChunJian Zhang ( czhang.phys AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NN2024/Imaging-collective-structure-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR

Comment:
Nice abstract. I sign off with few suggestions:
- line 7: triaxiality -> triaxiality gamma
- line 10: beta_2U -> beta_2 (?)
- line 11: you can remove 'triaxiality'
- line 12-13: remove 'collisions' around Zr
- line 14: impacts by -> impacts from
- line 15: this pair -> the pair
- line 15: measurement suggests -> measurements suggest
- line 16: remove comma after Zr
- line 18: is discussed -> is also discussed

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