STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Gavin Wilks <gwilks3 AT uic.edu>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for the comments. 

Regarding your comment on line 117, are you suggesting that I remove the fit 
to BES-I data in the figure?

Best,
Gavin

> On Jan 19, 2024, at 04:16, subhash via Star-fcv-l 
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> 
> Dear Gavin,
> 
> Very nice proceedings. I have a few questions and suggestions below for 
> your consideration:
> 
> abstract:
> s = s_NN =
> nuclear structure --> What do you mean by nuclear structure here, I didn't 
> get the context here.
> 
> l#10: At the center of non-central --> At the non-central
> l#25: rest frame
> l#43-44: Along this line, you may mention BES-II allow more precision and 
> differential measurements which were not possible from BES-I.
> l#61: some temporary complications of signal extraction --> I think this 
> line is not needed, since it do not explain what is the underlying 
> complication. It seems too technical.
> Or may be you can rephrase something like, In future we will extend 
> measurements beyond 1.0 !
> l#68:  The mixed-event method is used to generate the combinatorial 
> background ....
> l#72-73: Have you varied background shape eg poly-3 vs poly-2 for 
> systematics?
> l#75: Is the width fixed to PDG or extracted from data for integrated 
> theta* bins?
> l#94-95: Do you apply any PID efficiencies?
> l#115: The fit presented for the second-order event plane results is s fit 
> only to BES-I
> --> may be rephrased as, the solid line is a fit only to BES-I data ...
> l#117: The BES-II data at √𝑠NN = 19.6 GeV is consistent with the model fit 
> from BES-I and the details of the fit can be found in [1].
> --> I think this line is not necessary and can be removed. A better 
> approach would be to fit when precise data will be available for all BES-II 
> energies.
> l#153:  to be more specific: ... increasing 𝜌00 with rapidity (|y|>0.5) for 
> both energies ...
> l#156:  many collision energies --> remaining collision energies
> l#157: I'd suggest a rephrase: This work explores the potential link 
> between the 𝜙-meson field and global spin alignment, ....
> 
> 
> I sign off with these addressed.
> 
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
> 
> 
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