STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[LikeLiu <likeliu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Zhenyu,

Many thanks for your nice suggestions! 
I have revised the draft based on them, and the motivation part has been 
rephrased.
Please let me know if you have further comments.

thanks,
Li-Ke

> 2024年2月21日 上午5:38，webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> 写道：
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> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> originally  
> submitted by Li-ke Liu ( likeliu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/CPOD-2024/Collectivity-high-baryon-density-STAR-BES-II-program
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> Comment:
> Nice abstract. I have few suggestions:
> - Title: at the high baryon density -> with high baryon density
> - The first two sentences look obsolete and redundant to me. I suggest to  
> remove them;
> - Last sentence of first paragraph does not connect with the previous  
> sentence;
> - Please rephrase the motivation part to make clear why the measurement is  
> important and why BESII program is ideal for those measurements
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