STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Emmy,


Nice slides. I have a few additional comments below:

s#12: You can add reference of flow method paper.
Fix the legend remove the underscore and some of the nomenclatures like 
flattened can be written as final.

s#13: Bottom plot should be improved, please add proper labels on the 
plot, Y-axis, X-axis (shifted) etc
You have mentioned that you are weighting with raw v1, but the 
top-panels are corrected one, I guess. Then don't you use that one.

s#17: Somewhere inside the figure, please indicate the kinematic cuts 
(pt or momentum cuts) and  linear fit with fit range.

Why the proton v1, especially  at 7.7 GeV is so different? Is there any 
difference in acceptance cut. BES-2 systematic is of similar order to 
that of BEs-1 ! I am asking because you are saying significant in 
accuracy in first bullet. But it doesn't look so.


s#19, 21: same as #17, indicate kinematic cuts.

back up: I don't think we usually show the systematic checks or tables 
outside STAR. please remove those. They are very technical and STAR 
internal.

A Policy reminder: As per STAR policy you should post your slides to 
Drupal at least two weeks before deadline so that we have enough time to 
review your slides.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash



On 2024-05-18 11:43 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> Comment:
> Nice slides. I sign off with few suggestions:
> - Slide4: make the 2nd and 3rd equation larger for visibility
> - Slide13: "some energies", please be more specific
> - Slide14: highly pure signals -> high purity signals
> - Slide22: define "reduced rapidity" since it is in summary; Eos -> EOS
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