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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Muhammad Farhan Taseer ( mfarhan_taseer AT yahoo.com )  
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Comment:
Hi Muhammad,
Nice slides. I have a few comments for your consideration:

s#2: "v1 and Δv1 Results" --> Directed Flow Results
s#%: It might be good to write dv1+/dy - dv1-/dy
s#7: "Larger acceptance" --> Wide acceptance
Note: pls remember |eta| < 1.5 is for the energies where we have iTPC.
above "mass square information using TOF", you should mention energy loss  
using TPC because you used both TPC and TOF to identify particles
s#9: Title: Mid-central U+U Collisions
s#9, 10: pls mention the pt and p coverage like you do for v1 slopes
s#10: Positive and Negative Pions  (Kaons) --> ...
Protons and antiprotons --> ...
s#11: 1st bullet: Pions (Kaons)
2nd bullet: mid-central
s#12: you may add a sentence on energy dependence of Delta_v1, eg Delta_v1  
increases with decrease in energy as a 2nd bullet
s#14: Pions (Kaons) --> ...
Please use a consistent notation for p_T or P_t in all slides.
 
I sign-off with these being addressed. 

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