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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Qiang Hu ( qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-global-and-local-spin-polarization-Lambda-and-Lambda-bar-AuAu-c-0

Comment:
Dear Qiang,
Nice slides. I have a few minor comments for your consideration:
s#10: you can consider adding the first paper (published) proposing baryonic  
SHE: Phys.Rev.D 104 (2021) 5, 054043; Phys.Rev.Lett. 127 (2021) 14, 
142301  
in addition to what you have already.
s#14: Please include the beam energy, centrality etc  inside the figures;
You can consider having same style in X-axis levels left and right plots
s#15: Clear centrality dependence
s#17: We could also point out the excellent precision in BES-II, like how  
much the errors have been reduced compared to BES-I.
s#20: I think we should probably double check the 11.6 GeV P_2y data, why  
there is a jump! 
s#24: "within uncertainty" -->Â within uncertainties
"Monotonic energy dependent" -->Â Monotonic energy dependence in P ...



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