STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Yicheng Feng ( feng216 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2024/Overview-STAR-Measurements-FlowChiralityVorticity

Comment:
Nice abstract. Some minor suggestions:

Revise the sentence "Measurements of anisotropic flow will be pertinent to  
the QCD matter phase diagram". Flow was never the key observable for studying 
 
QCD phase diagram. It is primarily
about the fluid-dynamic property. Add something like "Measurements of  
anisotropic flow at various collision energy....." in the beginning.


"generate vorticity in QCD matter" --> "generate vorticity in QCD matter  
produced in heavy ion collisions"  (highlight the fact that it is due to the  
geometry of collisions)
''-- the chiral magnetic effect" --> "through the phenomenon known as the  
chiral magnetic effect"





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