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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
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Comment:
Nice proceedings. I sign off with a few comments.

The main point is that you discuss BES results but do not show any plots.  
Also, you don't cite any previous references where such results were shown.  
This makes it a bit difficult to follow the discussion.
You can either remove this part and focus this on the system dependence to  
make a more coherent write up. You can also say that BES data were previously 
 
presented elsewhere with a citation.

line 18:
"significant importance in QCD," --> "significant importance in exploring the 
 
properties of QCD matter under extreme conditions,"  (you need to imply here  
that B-field is external catalyst to QCD)

Consistently use "Delta" or "\Delta"

To save space, combine ref 1 & 2 into one, consider citing arXiv:2304.02831  
along with arXiv:2304.03430 as reference 4 and cite them after line 37.

line 42: previous study had 27 GeV data, so edit this line accordingly

line 45:
I guess this part "and different beam energies in Au+Au collisions." is not  
relevant for current discussion, you can remove it. If you want to keep it,  
you need a reference.

Line 63:
After the line about pions, add which needs further investigation

Also, somewhere add a line about the system dependence of v1 slope in the  
context of EM-field, say it needs further exploration and theoretical input.





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