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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NTHEP-2024/Collective-properties-nuclear-matter-STAR-experiment-RHIC-1

Comment:
Dear Vipul,

Nice proceedings. I sign off with a few suggestions:

Please consider adding a line number during review.

abstract:
In this proceedings --> In these proceedings;
"we discuss selected results" --> we discuss a few selected results

Introduction:
QGP --> Quark Gluon Plasma (QGP)

Discussion:directed flow part"
A positive" --> a positive"supports the expected dominance of the Faraday  
effect" --> supports the expected dominance of  combined Faraday and  
coulomb effect

"A positive Δ(dv1/dy) in (mid)central collisions for protons suggests a  
transported quark effect" --> A positive Δ(dv1/dy) in (mid) central  
collisions for hadrons with non-transported constinuent quarks can originate 
 
from a dominance of hall effect. [please double check the conclusion from  
reference [14]]

elliptic flow part (page-4):
"providing strong evidence for the formation of a QGP matter" --> say  
consistent with 

"v2 values and the violation of NCQ scaling" -->Â v2 values and the gradual  
violation of NCQ scaling

"in Fig. 5, suggest a phase transition from ..." --> in Fig. 5, can  
originate from a phase transition ...

Summary:
In summary, a few selected experimental results

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