STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[vipul <vipul AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.
I have implemented all in the updated version:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Proceedings_STARflowHighlights_v2.pdf

And sorry for the inconvenience due to the line numbers. I tried to 
include line numbers but the proceeding style doesn't allow line numbers 
and also their are no instructions on how to include line numbers for 
this format of proceedings from journal.

Thanks,
With Regards,
Vipul

On 2024-09-30 09:42, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material
> originally submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/NTHEP-2024/Collective-properties-nuclear-matter-STAR-experiment-RHIC-1
>
> Comment:
> Dear Vipul,
>
> Nice proceedings. I sign off with a few suggestions:
>
> Please consider adding a line number during review.
>
> abstract:
> In this proceedings --> In these proceedings;
> "we discuss selected results" --> we discuss a few selected results
>
> Introduction:
> QGP --> Quark Gluon Plasma (QGP)
>
> Discussion:directed flow part"
> A positive" --> a positive"supports the expected dominance of the 
> Faraday
> effect" --> supports the expected dominance of  combined Faraday 
> and
> coulomb effect
>
> "A positive Δ(dv1/dy) in (mid)central collisions for 
> protons suggests a
> transported quark effect" --> A positive Δ(dv1/dy) in (mid) central
> collisions for hadrons with non-transported constinuent quarks can 
> originate
> from a dominance of hall effect. [please double check the conclusion 
> from
> reference [14]]
>
> elliptic flow part (page-4):
> "providing strong evidence for the formation of a QGP matter" --> say
> consistent with 
>
> "v2 values and the violation of NCQ scaling" -->Â v2 values and the 
> gradual
> violation of NCQ scaling
>
> "in Fig. 5, suggest a phase transition from ..." --> in Fig. 5, can
> originate from a phase transition ...
>
> Summary:
> In summary, a few selected experimental results
>
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