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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Richard  Seto ( richard.seto AT ucr.edu ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Moe Isshiki ( k0nchar0127 AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Measurements-elliptic-and-triangular-flow-forward-and-backward-rapid

Comment:
Suggestions to improve the language. The content is good.
L1 "the" before "forward"
L7 kill "the" before "hydrodynamic"
L9 "in" -> "at"
L10 kill "so far"
L11 rewrite line to "scan program (BESII) at RHIC-STAR, data from Au+Au  
collisions at lower collision energies"
L16 "the" before "PHOBOS"
L17 "in" -> "over"
L18 kill "an"



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