STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[misshiki <misshiki AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Richard,


Thank you for your comments.
I modified my abstract and uploaded the new version.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Measurements-elliptic-and-triangular-flow-forward-and-backward-rapid

Thank you very much!


Best regards,
Moe


On 2024-11-05 08:27, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Richard  Seto ( richard.seto AT ucr.edu ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Moe Isshiki ( k0nchar0127 AT gmail.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Measurements-elliptic-and-triangular-flow-forward-and-backward-rapid
>
> Comment:
> Suggestions to improve the language. The content is good.
> L1 "the" before "forward"
> L7 kill "the" before "hydrodynamic"
> L9 "in" -> "at"
> L10 kill "so far"
> L11 rewrite line to "scan program (BESII) at RHIC-STAR, data from Au+Au
> collisions at lower collision energies"
> L16 "the" before "PHOBOS"
> L17 "in" -> "over"
> L18 kill "an"
>
>
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