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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Sonia,

thanks for nice slides.

My general comment on the poster is to reduce the amount of material that you currently have. Otherwise, it will be very hard for people to go through the plots and text.

Then it is up to you to choose what you want to show. 

If you want to show an overview of the open HF results, I would suggest: 

-  remove s2 and s4

-  show 1 plot from each topic you want to include and have not more than 2/3 bullets of conclusions out of it

- I would remove the technical plots, which are nice but I guess you want to show more physics results: so, e.g. s. 6.7,8 and the mass plots

- remove one of Lambda_C results, you can instead add D_s/D0 ratio that was published more recently and from both Lambda_C and D_s/D0 ratios you can make conclusions regarding the coalescence

- pT -> p_T

- also, the orange titles are very hard to read on the blue background.

Best regards,

Barbara

On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 7:55 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Sonia,

Please find my comments on your nice slides.
With this implemented, I sign off.

SLide#2: "D0 Directed Flow and QGP" -> "D^0 Directed Flow and QGP"
SLide#3: "              R(AA) and R(CP) " ->"           R_AA and R_CP" (other slides)
SLide#5: "HFT, TPC, BEMC,TOF" -> Please introduce these abbreviations
somewhere here.
Slide7: "HFE" -> "Heavy flavor-decay electron (HFE)"
sLide10: "These results are consistent wth hydrodynamc model with an
initially tilted QGP source and an AMPT model "
->"Hydrodynamic model with an initially tilted QGP source and AMPT model
qualitatively explain the data"
Slide11: "…coalescence" -> "coalescence hadronization of charm hadron"
(Same on slide15)
Slide14: "within errors" -> "within uncertainties" ; NN - > N+N (to be
consistent with slide#15)

Thank you
Nihar




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