STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some comments and suggestions for your consideration. 

 - General: please submit your contribution to the HP PWG list 2 weeks before the conference.

                  Could you please remind me how long your talk is?

 - p3: J/psi are ideal probes --> J/psi is an ideal probe ....

          Why do you mention "Jet quenching" here? 

          J/psi RAA are good  -->  J/psi RAA is a good 

 - p5: this slide reads strange to me (difficult to follow the logic), I would suggest to change it to something like: 

         - Large isobar sample (Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru) collected by STAR 

            - ~4B good minimum bias events 

                -->  Unique opportunity to measure the spectra with good precision

            - Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru have moderate collisions size  

                --> Provide a Unique opportunity to study the system size dependence

 - p11: Model calculations are --> Model calculation is   (you only have one model, right?) 

 - p15: suppression ... has been --> suppressions ... have been

 

Cheers,

Yi

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