STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yan,

nice slides. Please see my comments below. With these addressed I sign off. 

- s3: Introduction -> Motivation (as you have a few slides named the same)

- s3: J/ψ 𝑅𝐴𝐴 is good observable -> J/ψ Nuclear Modification Factor, 𝑅𝐴𝐴, is good observable - and I would define R_AA, ICHEP audience might be more general.

- s4: Introduction -> Au+Au collisions at 54 GeV (or smth similar)

- s5: Introduction -> Isobar collisions at 200 GeV (or smth similar)

- s5: Provide a Unique -> Provide a unique

- s6: Identification of high-pT electrons -> Identification of high-pT electrons and triggering

- s8:  a straight line ->  a linear fit

- s15:  isobaric collisions and Au+Au collisions -> isobaric and Au+Au collisions

- s15:  of J/𝜓 𝑅𝐴𝐴 ->  of J/𝜓 𝑅𝐴𝐴 for similar <N_part>

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Jul 4, 2022 at 4:12 AM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yi,

Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have a 

look.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Ichep_slide_v2_0.pdf

Sorry for the late

my talk should be 12+3 minutes.

Best,

Yan

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主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for ICHEP 2022 submitted for review

Dear Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some comments and suggestions for your consideration. 

 - General: please submit your contribution to the HP PWG list 2 weeks before the conference.

                  Could you please remind me how long your talk is?

 - p3: J/psi are ideal probes --> J/psi is an ideal probe ....

          Why do you mention "Jet quenching" here? 

          J/psi RAA are good  -->  J/psi RAA is a good 

 - p5: this slide reads strange to me (difficult to follow the logic), I would suggest to change it to something like: 

         - Large isobar sample (Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru) collected by STAR 

            - ~4B good minimum bias events 

                -->  Unique opportunity to measure the spectra with good precision

            - Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru have moderate collisions size  

                --> Provide a Unique opportunity to study the system size dependence

 - p11: Model calculations are --> Model calculation is   (you only have one model, right?) 

 - p15: suppression ... has been --> suppressions ... have been

 

Cheers,

Yi

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