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[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Diptanil,

Thank you for having different abstract.
Please fine few comments below on your nice proceedings.
With implementing these, I sign off.

L3: '…medium, either through collisions, or …" -> "		medium either 
through collisions or  "
L4:             medium induced  -> "medium-induced "
L8:  "…LHC hints at its slight modification at low …" -> "…LHC hints at 
a modification at low …"
L10: "understanding the parton " -> "         understanding on the parton "
L12: "reconstruction  " -> "the reconstruction "
L16 "GeV, collected  " -> "…GeV collected…"

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-07-17 08:42, Diptanil Roy wrote:
> Hi Nihar and Yi, thank you for your comments. I have uploaded a
> slightly amended version of the abstract here.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HotQuarks2022_DiptanilRoy_v2.pdf
>
> Please let me know your comments and suggestions on the same. Thank
> you.
>
> On Thu, Jul 14, 2022 at 5:16 AM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Hi Diptanil,
> >
> > I agree with Nihar that it would be great to have a "slightly"
> > different abstract for different conferences.
> > You just need to modify it a little bit.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Wed, Jul 13, 2022 at 12:40 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > > Hi Diptanil,
> > >
> > > As you mentioned this is exactly the same abstract as your DNP, I
> > > would
> > > suggest to modify or rephrase little bit your Hot Quark 2022
> > > abstract
> > > (although it is Ok to submit the same).
> > > A different abstract (with different title) is good to submit.
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > > Nihar
> > >
> > > On 2022-07-12 22:00, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > Hi everyone, I have uploaded an abstract for Hot Quarks 2022. It
> > > is
> > > > the same as the accepted abstract for APS 2022. Please let me
> > > know if
> > > > you have any comments. Thank you.
> > > >
> > > > On Tue, Jul 12, 2022 at 12:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > > >
> > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Diptanil Roy (roydiptanil AT gmail.com) has submitted a material
> > > for a
> > > > > review,
> > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60254
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