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[Diptanil Roy <roydiptanil AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yi, do we usually put references in abstract? If not, I would like to keep it as is.

Thank you!

On Sun, Jul 17, 2022 at 9:09 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Diptanil,

Thanks a lot for the updated abstract. 

It looks very nice. I only have one minor comment for your consideration. 

 L9: add the reference for the CMS measurement. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Jul 17, 2022 at 9:35 PM Diptanil Roy <roydiptanil AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Nihar, thank you for the comments. I have implemented them in v3 here. https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HotQuarks2022_DiptanilRoy_v3.pdf

L10: "understanding the parton " -> "           understanding on the parton"

I prefer the original version for this, so I would like to keep it as is.

Cheers,

On Sun, Jul 17, 2022 at 2:30 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Diptanil,

Thank you for having different abstract.
Please fine few comments below on your nice proceedings.
With implementing these, I sign off.

L3: '…medium, either through collisions, or …" -> "             medium either
through collisions or  "
L4:             medium induced  -> "medium-induced "
L8:  "…LHC hints at its slight modification at low …" -> "…LHC hints at
a modification at low …"
L10: "understanding the parton " -> "           understanding on the parton "
L12: "reconstruction  " -> "the reconstruction "
L16 "GeV, collected  " -> "…GeV collected…"

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-07-17 08:42, Diptanil Roy wrote:
> Hi Nihar and Yi, thank you for your comments. I have uploaded a
> slightly amended version of the abstract here.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HotQuarks2022_DiptanilRoy_v2.pdf
>
> Please let me know your comments and suggestions on the same. Thank
> you.
>
> On Thu, Jul 14, 2022 at 5:16 AM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Diptanil,
>>
>> I agree with Nihar that it would be great to have a "slightly"
>> different abstract for different conferences.
>> You just need to modify it a little bit.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>>
>> On Wed, Jul 13, 2022 at 12:40 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Diptanil,
>>>
>>> As you mentioned this is exactly the same abstract as your DNP, I
>>> would
>>> suggest to modify or rephrase little bit your Hot Quark 2022
>>> abstract
>>> (although it is Ok to submit the same).
>>> A different abstract (with different title) is good to submit.
>>>
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>> On 2022-07-12 22:00, Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>> Hi everyone, I have uploaded an abstract for Hot Quarks 2022. It
>>> is
>>>> the same as the accepted abstract for APS 2022. Please let me
>>> know if
>>>> you have any comments. Thank you.
>>>>
>>>> On Tue, Jul 12, 2022 at 12:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60254
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