STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Hao,

Please find my comments on your nice presentation slides.
With these implemented, I sign off.


sqrt(s) -> sqrt ($s$)
Slide2: "…almost-zero polarization… " -> "… almost zero polarization…"
Slide4 : Need to define what is "jet activity"? What is "raw jet 
activity"?
Slide7: I think we have not corrected the jet pT here. If so, then 
please mention that.
Slide11:
"uncertainties are estimated" -> "systematic uncertainties are 
estimated"
"PYTHIA" -> PYTHIA8
"A new variable for theorists to distinguish different models…" -> "A 
new observable to constrain different models…"
"Need more theoretical predictions," -> "Need theory calculations,…"


Cheers
Nihar


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