STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Tanmay,

   Thanks for the updated version. I dont have further comments and sign off

thanks

Sooraj

On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 12:22 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Tanmay,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments/suggestions.

Cheers,

Yi

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On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 4:30 AM tpani <tpani AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Thank you all for your nice comments,

I have implemented them and uploaded the updated slides here:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Tanmay_DNP_v3.pdf

Please have a look and let me know if there are any more comments.

Regards,

Tanmay
On 2022-10-19 15:04, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Tanmay,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some comments/suggestions for
> your consideration.
>   - Title: at sqrt(sNN) = 200 GeV reads a bit strange to me, I would
> suggest to "in p+p collisions at sqrt(s) = 200 GeV" or "in p+p and
> Au+Au collisions at 200 GeV"  (I understand you mention Au+Au as the
> future plan, but the talk itself is still based on pp data, correct?)
>   - p2: the last bullet should move to p6
>   - p6: sqrt(sNN) --> sqrt(s)
>
>            event --> events
>            constituent (track) --> constituents (tracks)
>   - p7: Title: probably do not use "Results from data" --> "Raw
> distributions from data"
>           I don't recall this is the preliminary results, so I would
> remove the second bullet (also since these are uncorrected
> distributions, probably shouldn't draw the conclusion)
>           Similar comment on the third bullet.
>   - p8: extra space in front of "generator" on the right side
>   -p13: remove the last bullet
>   -p14: PtD --> p_T^D  same style as before
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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