STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tanmay,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some comments/suggestions for your consideration. 

  - Title: at sqrt(sNN) = 200 GeV reads a bit strange to me, I would suggest to "in p+p collisions at sqrt(s) = 200 GeV" or "in p+p and Au+Au collisions at 200 GeV"  (I understand you mention Au+Au as the future plan, but the talk itself is still based on pp data, correct?) 

  - p2: the last bullet should move to p6

  - p6: sqrt(sNN) --> sqrt(s) 

           event --> events 

           constituent (track) --> constituents (tracks) 

  - p7: Title: probably do not use "Results from data" --> "Raw distributions from data"

          I don't recall this is the preliminary results, so I would remove the second bullet (also since these are uncorrected distributions, probably shouldn't draw the conclusion)

          Similar comment on the third bullet. 

  - p8: extra space in front of "generator" on the right side 

  -p13: remove the last bullet 

  -p14: PtD --> p_T^D  same style as before 

Cheers,

Yi

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