STAR HardProbes PWG

[Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the comments. I implemented most of your suggestions and updated the abstract here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DIS_abstract_112722.pdf

L18: I think the original statement is also correct and makes a stronger case for this measurement, since I specified "hadronic collisions" I think the H1 measurement doesn't count. Do you know if MultiFold has been used in any other experiments?

L24-25: Yes, the particle-level observables means the same as fully corrected observables, and I didn't mention that the second time because I had "After fully correcting six jet substructure observables…" before that. I rephrased "their correlations" to "the correlations among them".

Best,

Youqi

On Fri, Nov 25, 2022 at 11:05 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Youqi,

Please fine my comments below on your nice abstract.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DIS_abstract_112122.pdf

L2-3: "..IN √s = 200 GEV pp COLLISIONS" -> "… IN pp collisions at √s =
200 GEV BY STAR"
L13: "…and requires binning." -> "… and requires their binning."
L18: "…the first time to hadronic collision data." -> "…the first time
to hadronic collision data at RHIC"
L19: "…pp collisions…" -> "… in pp collisions…"
L20: "…the 2012 RHIC run period." -> "… the year 2012." (Here "RHIC run
period" is not required.)
L22-23: "After fully correcting six jet substructure observables…" -> 
""After fully correcting six jet substructure observables such as…" It
would be good to mention what are those six substructure observables?
L24-25: "…present a selection of particle-level observables and their
correlations, with comparisons to Monte Carlo event generators."
   Not clear. Can you rephrase this sentence? Do you mean "fully
corrected observables" ?  "and their correlation" -> do you mean the
correlation among all these observables?

Cheers
Nihar


On 2022-11-25 20:55, Youqi Song wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> This is the version that I would like to submit
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DIS_abstract_112122.pdf
>
> Best,
> Youqi
>
> On Fri, Nov 25, 2022 at 10:10 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hello Youqi,
>>
>> I can see two abstracts uploaded.
>> Can you please confirm which one you want to submit? Or something I
>> missed here?
>>
>> Regards
>> Nihar
>>
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