STAR HardProbes PWG

[Tristan Protzman <tlp220 AT lehigh.edu>]

Hi Sooraj,

Thanks for the feedback, those changes have been made and a new draft uploaded.

Cheers,

Tristan 

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 1:55 PM Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:

Hi Tristran,

   Your abstract is nicely written. I sign off with a few minor comments

L11 ellipsoidal?

L12: It would be better to swap the order of next sentence and this

thanks

Sooraj

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 4:06 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Tristan,

Thank you for your reply.
Your abstract looks good to me. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar



On 2022-11-28 22:48, Tristan Protzman wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I forgot to mention, I did also change the description of the hard
> core matching criteria to make it easier to understand based on
> feedback from within the Lehigh group.
>
> Cheers,
> Tristan
>
> On Mon, Nov 28, 2022 at 11:45 AM Tristan Protzman <tlp220 AT lehigh.edu>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Nihar, Barbara,
>>
>> Thank you for the feedback.  I wasn't sure how much detail I needed
>> to go into for the introduction so I erred on the side of too much,
>> it's useful to know I can (and have) shorten that.  I also have
>> introduced v2 in terms of the second order Fourier harmonic.
>>
>> Nihar, I do plan to present the R dependence and mention this on
>> line 18 of the updated draft.  Since we have not settled on the
>> specific R values to use, I left it ambiguous.
>>
>> A new draft has been uploaded to Drupal.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Tristan
>>
>> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 10:54 AM Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Tristan,
>>
>> I agree with Nihar that you can make the introduction schorter as
>> it's for HP, but it's up to you.
>> I don't have additional comments to your nice abstract and sign off.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>>
>> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 12:39 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>> Hello Tristan,
>>
>> Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
>>
>> L6-10: As this is a Hard probes conference, I think you can make all
>>
>> these sentences into one or directly jump to jet and QGP, without
>> introducing. That will help to make this abstract concise.
>> L12: Need to introduce "v2^jet" in terms of 2nd harmonic
>>
>> Do you have plan to present jet R dependence results?
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
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Sooraj Radhakrishnan

Research Scientist,

Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44243

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
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Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov