STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
Measurements -> Measurement
Line-10: "…binding energies, which…" -> "…binding energies which…"
Line-7: "…was proposed to be a direct …" -> "…was proposed as a direct…"
Line-15: "In this talk, we will present…" -> "In this talk, we report…"

Line-16: "isobaric collisions " -> "Isobar collisions";
200GeV -> 200 GeV
with the STAR experiment. -> in the STAR experiment.
pT bins  -> transverse momentum.

Line-17: "…will be presented…" - > "…are presented…"
Line-18:In addition, The results will be also compared… -> In addition, 
the results are also compared …at the LHC energy …


Cheers
Nihar




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