STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Gaohan,

please find my comments to your nice abstract below.

And I would like to ask you what are your plans regarding the preliminaries for Upsilon in isobar collisions ? 

- L9: at RHIC -> at the top RHIC

- L10-12: Moreover, different Υ states possess different amounts of binding energies, which are expected to experience different levels of yield suppression in the QGP depending on the interplay between the medium temperature and their binding energies. -> 

Moreover, due to different binding energies, different Upsilon states are expected to dissociate at different temperatures. 

- L15: $Au+Au$ -> Au+Au

- L16: isobaric -> isobaric (Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr)

- L16: STAR experiment -> STAR experiment at RHIC

- L18: and pT bins -> and transverse momentum

- L18: The results -> the results

- L19: theoretical calculations -> to theoretical calculations

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 1:49 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gaohan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title:
Measurements -> Measurement
Line-10: "…binding energies, which…" -> "…binding energies which…"
Line-7: "…was proposed to be a direct …" -> "…was proposed as a direct…"
Line-15: "In this talk, we will present…" -> "In this talk, we report…"

Line-16: "isobaric collisions " -> "Isobar collisions";
200GeV -> 200 GeV
with the STAR experiment. -> in the STAR experiment.
pT bins  -> transverse momentum.

Line-17: "…will be presented…" - > "…are presented…"
Line-18:In addition, The results will be also compared… -> In addition,
the results are also compared …at the LHC energy …


Cheers
Nihar




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