STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Rosi,

Yes, I have noticed that and implemented your comments.
Besides I have done significant modifications that I will post tomorrow.

Thank you
Nihar


On 2023-03-20 22:44, Rosi Reed wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
> I had posted comments to the drupal, but I'm told that even though
> there is a box for comments that we don't use it and so I should just
> send an email.  Sorry for the repeat if you did see my comments!
> Cheers,
> Rosi
>
> Hi Nihar (and Joern),
> My small comments on your nice slides are below!
>
> title
> Remove page number
> Move DOE/STAR logos so they don't overlap with names.  (Or just remove
> all the footers since all that info is on the title slide)
>
> Slide 2: I know you grabbed these plots from the RHIC Run overview,
> but maybe use powerpoint to make the legends bigger.
> Remove title on the left plot, unnecessary
>
> Increase in statistics over the years for precision measurement ->
> Increased luminosity improves the precision of our measurements
>
> Different collision species to study the hot QCD medium ->
> Different collision species allows system size, geometry and
> temperature studies
>
> Slide 3: We have not yet run STAR with a trigger rate of 5kHz....
> That will be run 23.
>
> Slide 4: At RHIC energy -> At RHIC  Or maybe just remove it entirely
> since there is also PHENIX, sPHENIX.
>
> I'd be careful in the statement of the baryon-to-meson ratio - it is
> not yet clear precisely what Gabe's nice measurement means, but since
> it is only seen in specific jet selections perhaps you can say
> something more like, "jet hadrochemistry"
>
> bullet 3, on jet and heavy-flavor production?  (it's a sentence
> fragment as is)
>
> Slide 6: For symmetry the relationship between the plots and formulas
> on the page should be the same. Also the jet shape formula is way too
> small
>
> Slide 7: Indicates the confinement
>
> Slide 11: Formulas are too small here
> Can we see it is the first observation?  ALICE has a result out:
> https://indico.cern.ch/event/895086/contributions/4742231/attachments/2423783/4149055/220407_QM22_v3_upload.pdf
>
> Slide 12: Be careful here - I think you should show one of Gabe's
> other plots in addition to this one, he only sees this enhancement
> when we select the 2 GeV constituent cut in HI collisions.  So while
> this is very interesting, and maybe we'll learn something about
> hadronization in the QGP through Gabe's efforts, but it's not a
> generic effect.  (I don't think the statement regarding the
> constituent selection is sufficient)
>
> Slide 16: Do we have a comment on why we observe suppression but no
> v2?
>
> On Sun, Mar 19, 2023 at 4:04 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear All,
> >
> > I have prepared first draft of STAR highlight presentation at
> > HP2023.
> > I would like to inform you that this presentation will be voiced by
> > Joern Putschke (Thank you, Joren, for agreeing and for your support)
> > and
> > I will discuss with him on these slides this week too.
> >
> > As you can find many plots are not yet final and still under
> > discussion
> > for "STAR preliminary" approval, so these plots will be updated soon
> >
> > (and possible physics interpretations).
> > Besides there are some typos and wording need to be refined which
> > will
> > be done in coming days.
> >
> > Please have a look at only this presentation ID#63015
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63015
> >
> > The duration of this plenary talk is 20mins.
> >
> > Please have a look and give your comment and suggestions.
> >
> > Thank you
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-03-19 13:14, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Nihar Sahoo (nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63015
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2022-12-05
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