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[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Hi Youqi,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - p2: your right-handed cartoon plot covers the text a bit. 

 - p3: the resolution at the left-bottom area (z_g, z_cut, and beta) is not good? And similar for dM/M and M on p4. 

 - p6: What does "~" mean here? I saw 3 places. 

 - p12: Could you please remind me of the motivation for comparing HERWIG with LHC tune? Do we expect the tune works for RHIC? 

 - p14: the "boxes (yellow, green, and black)" cover the information on the plot, could you please try a thinner line for them? 

 - p15: I am not sure if it is good to say "See Monika's talk at HP", probably is okay...

Cheers,

Yi

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