STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Brennan,

Thank you for preparing this nice poster.

Please find my comments below.

Abstract:
"In this poster we present…" -> "In this poster, we present…"

In event section, Particle  ID cuts, Tracking cuts there are technical.
If these could be a bit descriptive, then it could be easier for poster 
viewers.

With this implemented, I sign off.


Cheers
Nihar

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