STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Veronica

Thank you for this nice overview presentation.

Please find my comments below.

Slide2:
Please include the references for "Lifetime …" and "Temperature…";
It depends on different considerations so you need to cite the paper 
where you picked these numbers.

What is "Slight color dipole"? "Slight"?
quarkonium state -> quarkonium states


Slide4:
"Time of flight" -> Time of flight measurement
(Because you have already used Time-of-flight at top)

"…below TPC pT acceptance" -> "…at low pT" (TPC acceptance can go to low 
pT but detection not good)


Slide8
In this slide, you need to introduce what is "EA" and how do we measure 
in STAR briefly.

within systematics -> within uncertainty

Slide10:
"Therefore, no CNM observed in J/ψ in small systems within systematics 
at
high-pT"
-> No CNM effect at high-pT  [better with less words]
within systematics -> within uncertainty


SLide12:
"Energy loss at LHC is larger than at RHIC" How do you conclude this 
statement ?


 Slide13:
I would not encourage you to show these D^0 jet results because Diptanil 
showed at last collaboration meeting that our results have been changed 
due to some track selection cut.
I understand these are "STAR preliminary" but we now know that results 
have been changed.


SLide17:
"No significant CNM effects at low pT in J/ψ" -> Is not that "at high 
pT" ?
"Matched dijet asymmetry shows no angular dependence of jet energy loss" 
-> This is not in general. It is only in the case of hard-core jet 
selection. So please include this in this sentence

Upsilon RAA -> Upsilon R_{AA}


Cheers
Nihar





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