STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Thank you for preparing this nice presentation and it looks good to 
motivate your work.
Please find my comments on your presentation slides.

Slide1:
Title - " …Au+Au@200 GeV" -> "…Au+Au \sqrt{s_{\rm NN}} = 200 GeV"

Slide2:
_ "Suppression of production of D0 meson at " -> " Suppression of D^0 
meson at …"
_ "and significant level of thermalization " -> "and its thermalization"
_ "Current data does not sufficiently discriminate between models" -> 
"Need new observables to constrain different models and understand 
production mechanisms"
_New observables … -> Drop it, you have mentioned above

Slide5:
"Coulomb interaction" Is there reason to make it red color? If yes, 
better to mention here.

SLide7:
In Title  remove one "from"  (Same for slide8)

Slide10:
"Overall: data suggest small role of D hadronic re-scattering in 
heavy-ion collisions" ->Where do you get this conclusion? Please provide 
the reference. I don't see such statement from ALICE QM22 presentation. 
I probably missed.

Slide11:

Not for this presentation, but for the future and for your analysis,
Can you contact these theorists to have similar calculation for your 
analysis kinematics?

Slide14:
Remove "Figure 7 : Particle identification using TPC (left) and TOF 
(right)"
And make it large text "Particle identification using TPC (left) and TOF 
(right)"

Slide18:
"Correction of detector effects" -> I would say "Experimental 
challenges"
Because "Self correlation" is not a detector effect.

"No. of hit points / Max no. of hit points > 0.51"  this is too 
technical.
You could add a sentence "Additional track selection criteria"


Cheers
Nihar




On 2023-04-10 14:44, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Convenors,
>
>  I sincerely apologize for the delay in uploading the slides for
> review. My talk has been rescheduled to Friday, April 14th. Looking
> forward to your comments and suggestions.
>  You can find my slides here
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/GHP-2023_v2.pdf [1]
>  Thank you.
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
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