STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Isaac, Tristan, Rosi, Nihar, Subhash,

Thanks for the nice merged abstract.

Please find below my suggestions. 

I would suggest changing the title to something less general - to minimize the chance of merging with our inclusive jet abstract.

Studying path-length dependence of jet quenching at STAR. Or something along those lines, I know it may not perfectly describe everything that we want to show, but I think we need something more catchy than the current title. 

- L10: p+p -> $p$+$p$

- L19:  the suppression (or enhancement) -> the modification.

- L23: I would remove "low-background". It's a bit subjective what is low. Alternatively, maybe lower than Au+Au

Please make sure you stay at the 350 word limit. 

Cheers,

Barbara

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