STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yuan,

I still think the following sentence is not clear:

"In particular, the study of heavy flavor quark energy loss is an independent way to extract the properties of QGP bulk medium, which is generated by the hard scattering process with large energy and momentum deposition during several fm/c."

You write at the beginning that heavy quarks are produced in hard scatterings. I suggest:

Therefore they are ideal probes for studying the Quark-Gluon Plasma (QGP) properties. In particular, the study of heavy flavor quark energy loss is an independent way to extract the properties of QGP bulk medium, which is generated by the hard scattering process with large energy and momentum deposition during several fm/c. ->  Therefore they are ideal probes of the medium properties that can be extracted via studies of the heavy flavor quark energy loss.  

With this addressed, I sign off. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 1:49 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Yuan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I don't have further comment.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-04-21 08:59, suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn wrote:
> Dear Nihar and Barbara,
>
>    Thank you for your comments. I have updated a new version of the
> abstract:
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Measurements-inclusive-D0-meson-production-isobar-collisions-%E2%88%9AsNN-20
>
> Best regards,
> Yuan
>
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>> Hello Yuan,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>> _ Title: with the STAR experiment -> at STAR
>> _"Heavy flavor quarks have a high probability of experiencing a
>> relatively complete evolution process of QCD materials," -> Not sure
>> why? Do you mean it is because they are produced at the very stage of
>> the collisions?
>> QCD materials?
>> _ "an independent way to extract" not sure what is independent way?
>> _ the first measurements -> the measurements
>> _ D^0 pT -> The D^0 pT …
>> _ 0-10%, 10-40% and 40-80% -> 0-10%, 10-40%, and 40-80%
>> _ collisions, demonstrating that charm -> collisions that demonstrates
>> the charm…
>> _"And model calculations reproduce the feature of RAA measured at 200
>> GeV." -> Finally, the model calculations are compared to the data and
>> implications are discussed.
>>
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
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>> > Yuan Su (suyuann AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
>> > review,
>> > please have a look:
>> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63440
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