STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tristan, Rosi,

I sign off your nice abstract with a minor comment:

L14: show progress towards making this measurement with the STAR detector. -> show progress towards performing this measurement in heavy-ion collisions with the STAR detector.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 1:52 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Tristan,

Thank you for your updated abstract.
I don't have further comment.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-20 18:35, Tristan Protzman wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thanks for the nice comments.  All suggestions have been taken as
> given, except:
>
> L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
> demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
> determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " -> "the
> polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated the
> global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
> collisions."
>
> How about "the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which can be
> determined through its parity violating decay and has been
> demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity in heavy-ion
> collisions, is measured."?
>
> Cheers,
> Tristan
>
> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:49 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hello Tristan and Rosi,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>> L4: the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) formed in these collisions. ->
>> "…the
>> quark-gluon plasma (QGP)."
>> L7: …whose answer will help inform models describing the… ->
>> …whose
>> answer will inform the models description of the…
>> L9: introduce velocity gradients  -> introduce the velocity
>> gradients
>> L11: To experimentally measure this vortical structure,  the… ->
>> To
>> measure this vortical structure,  the…
>> L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
>> demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
>> determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " ->
>> "the
>> polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated
>> the
>> global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
>> collisions."
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>> On 2023-04-18 19:21, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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>>>
>>> Tristan Protzman (tlp220 AT lehigh.edu) has submitted a material for
>> a
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