STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tristan,

Thank you for your updated abstract.
I don't have further comment.
I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-04-20 18:35, Tristan Protzman wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thanks for the nice comments.  All suggestions have been taken as
> given, except:
>
> L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
> demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
> determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " -> "the
> polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated the
> global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
> collisions."
>
> How about "the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which can be
> determined through its parity violating decay and has been
> demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity in heavy-ion
> collisions, is measured."?
>
> Cheers,
> Tristan
>
> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:49 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Tristan and Rosi,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> > L4: the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) formed in these collisions. ->
> > "…the
> > quark-gluon plasma (QGP)."
> > L7: …whose answer will help inform models describing the… ->
> > …whose
> > answer will inform the models description of the…
> > L9: introduce velocity gradients  -> introduce the velocity
> > gradients
> > L11: To experimentally measure this vortical structure,  the… ->
> > To
> > measure this vortical structure,  the…
> > L11-13: "...the polarization of emitted Λ hyperons, which has been
> > demonstrated to be correlated with the global vorticity and can be
> > determined through its parity violating decay, is measured. " ->
> > "the
> > polarization of emitted Λ hyperons is measured that demonstrated
> > the
> > global vorticity through its parity violating decay in heavy-ion
> > collisions."
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2023-04-18 19:21, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Tristan Protzman (tlp220 AT lehigh.edu) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63453
> > >
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